Ep 1/pilot: The legend of Whitey Mcfedom!

Author prologue: If I get positive or constructive feedback I may continue with this story. It’s loosely based on one of my continued dreams. I hope that my poor grammar and spelling will not make my story unattractive. The plot is somewhat complicated as its not something I'm thinking of as I go along, I already no what’s going to happen and already made side plots that link back into the past and present. I hope you like what my dreaming mind made!
It was the year 1975 in South England the cop et tat had removed the government and the country had been at war with Nato. The Europeans were trying to remove the general Gregory S Bloggs for power some time now, who had managed to cling onto southern England. The rest of the country had been plunged into the dark ages with little or now electric power nor any support from the out side. Many had fled to France or Ireland but some remained, hoping that Nato would win.
In reality this storyline nearly became true when several English commanders became discontented with the current government and pondered to remove them. At the 11th hour the government backed down on what ever policies had caused the crisis and the commanders reversed their orders for an attack on Whitehall [London].
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HI, my name is Jack, well Jack o bite is what people here call me due to the scars I sustained from midges biting me. Well enough about that, I'm sure you want to no about the man who came here long ago and saved use from the three witches who called him self the ’Blades’ This man who saved us all called him self, err Brown... no no! It was whitey! Whitey McFedom!
Ha ha yes a regular hero who came to this land and saved use from the evil and setting us free! My memory fails me but this is how it went!
It had been raining hard all day and the grey clouds hung low above. The town’s people had finally revolted against their rulers and aided this young stranger. He drew his sword and it glistened brightly and he immediately started to parry with the last of the blade. He would weave in and out, high and low. Blocking her attack and cutting her their and everywhere. She was clad in a black leather outfit with high boots and two curved blades and a menacing black mask that hid much of her face. Now it had been stained with her own blood. You could see her scared, with a few tears coming from her eyes and disbelieve that she could be beaten, but she was. Whitey kicked her blade away and he knelt down before the fallen girl, muttering something that opened her eyes wide open and full of fright, he then promptly chopped her in half!
HAHA the party we had after their demise was something to remember! The self made beer and the fireworks, you had to have been their! It wasn’t so much the party, more the fact it was the turning point and finally we could live free!
You Jack, shut up already, I'm sure he has herd enough of your story! Isn’t that right! Well don’t mind him, he always exaggerates and twists anything that happened two years ago, and that’s not his name you racist prick it was Jazvir! Ill tell you how the story realy went!
[The story didn’t go as I hoped… oh well bring on chapter two.]

Author prologue: If I get positive or constructive feedback I may continue with this story. It’s loosely based on one of my continued dreams. I hope that my poor grammar and spelling will not make my story unattractive. The plot is somewhat complicated as its not something I'm thinking of as I go along, I already no what’s going to happen and already made side plots that link back into the past and present. I hope you like what my dreaming mind made!
It was the year 1975 in South England the cop et tat had removed the government and the country had been at war with Nato. The Europeans were trying to remove the general Gregory S Bloggs for power some time now, who had managed to cling onto southern England. The rest of the country had been plunged into the dark ages with little or now electric power nor any support from the out side. Many had fled to France or Ireland but some remained, hoping that Nato would win.
In reality this storyline nearly became true when several English commanders became discontented with the current government and pondered to remove them. At the 11th hour the government backed down on what ever policies had caused the crisis and the commanders reversed their orders for an attack on Whitehall [London].
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HI, my name is Jack, well Jack o bite is what people here call me due to the scars I sustained from midges biting me. Well enough about that, I'm sure you want to no about the man who came here long ago and saved use from the three witches who called him self the ’Blades’ This man who saved us all called him self, err Brown... no no! It was whitey! Whitey McFedom!
Ha ha yes a regular hero who came to this land and saved use from the evil and setting us free! My memory fails me but this is how it went!
It had been raining hard all day and the grey clouds hung low above. The town’s people had finally revolted against their rulers and aided this young stranger. He drew his sword and it glistened brightly and he immediately started to parry with the last of the blade. He would weave in and out, high and low. Blocking her attack and cutting her their and everywhere. She was clad in a black leather outfit with high boots and two curved blades and a menacing black mask that hid much of her face. Now it had been stained with her own blood. You could see her scared, with a few tears coming from her eyes and disbelieve that she could be beaten, but she was. Whitey kicked her blade away and he knelt down before the fallen girl, muttering something that opened her eyes wide open and full of fright, he then promptly chopped her in half!
HAHA the party we had after their demise was something to remember! The self made beer and the fireworks, you had to have been their! It wasn’t so much the party, more the fact it was the turning point and finally we could live free!
You Jack, shut up already, I'm sure he has herd enough of your story! Isn’t that right! Well don’t mind him, he always exaggerates and twists anything that happened two years ago, and that’s not his name you racist prick it was Jazvir! Ill tell you how the story realy went!
[The story didn’t go as I hoped… oh well bring on chapter two.]
