Poetic Loss of Justice
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Poetic Loss of Justice| Itu |
Posted: 8 February 2006, 04:17 PM
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I'll just post up some of my little writings here. I suppose it would almost be a journal for various poetry that I would want to put up over time. Reviews and opinions? I'd be grateful and appreciative of both. Comments? Go ahead and leave some. I won't mind having someone to talk to about what I write. -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 8 February 2006, 04:30 PM
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Entrance And to think we've all been left behind, flowering fruitless in the central markings of your Mother, flourishing endlessly in another level and others, of course. Nameless and mindless, do not underestimate our language, allowing images come sweep low before feet duly bathed. Hold! the sea away! Stay! my other contemporaries! Without the bonds latched high onto green, without a sample of a more foreign spite, can severe gold bring you that clearer sunlight? Store all Forget-Me-Nots away; Your birth has yet to water down the over all entrancement. -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 12 February 2006, 12:24 PM
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White Dove Were there times, long cast away, where silver tears could thus unfray, the softer things let fall beyond golden day? If so, I don't feel their memories inside, a distilled and ever faltering mind, left on the higher shelf of undue time. What good are fire and warmer thoughts, when within all settled and carved locks, the doorway has shut and welcomed naught? Suppose the sky was actually white, and colors had no truer sound than sight, would memories reflect the dear morning, or the solemn night? -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 15 February 2006, 10:09 AM
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Discernment Do you know where it's come from, whether symbolism has otherworldly immunity, or falls it to hues of a more: Crystalline Static Loon. Shine the fortunes of.. "I can't do this anymore." -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 15 February 2006, 07:18 PM
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Blood Splattered Scizzors Can the otherworld list fragrent blisses? Look forward to shimmering tides Fall back upon the thousandth silver sliver, a glass fork settled so deep inside the eye. Send several rounds into the mirror, rend its perfection useful. Damnation settles hard upon black shoulders, pooled below, slipping down a high cheekbone. Flame at me! Severance of all solitude, equal to a heartfelt zip.. undue equivalence and broken waters. Forego existance. -------------------
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| RahX |
Posted: 16 February 2006, 08:36 AM
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I like the second to last the best. You have a way with your words, that is for sure. -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 16 February 2006, 09:57 AM
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QUOTE (RahX @ Feb 16 2006, 11:36 AM) I like the second to last the best. You have a way with your words, that is for sure. Ah, thank ye!  And I'm glad that you liked it. -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 26 February 2006, 07:59 AM
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Oasis Stay and walk straighter. Listen to the dormant heights, your countless muted elders. Sign down in purple ink this single brand, a cooler glyph and fractured land. Can these pauses truly find sight? Would it help to sing under the light? Heavens above and skies just out of reach, unusual torments and a harrowed link, bless the forsaken, rend the unfought, sink into a skin, a child untaught. Can these pauses truly find sight? Would it help to sing under the light? Is there another record to blemish? A hollow bought unfinished? We're desperate for tonight, looking to the green red waterfalls. Since furrowed contemplations, from humbled associations, look not on the left, but to the right. Can these pauses truly find sight? Would it help to sing under the light? Is there another record to blemish? A hollow bought unfinished? Are dangling ribbons justified so? Safe are the ones from tomorrow? Would that I may resist, would that I'd the will to dismiss, a following tribute of an unfelt kiss, I've sunk deep, beneath said oasis. -------------------
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| Fullmetal Joe |
Posted: 26 February 2006, 12:02 PM
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nice job on the poetry..i like it -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 26 February 2006, 01:13 PM
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QUOTE (Fullmetal Joe @ Feb 26 2006, 03:02 PM) nice job on the poetry..i like it Ah, thankies thankies. -------------------
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| Fullmetal Joe |
Posted: 26 February 2006, 02:08 PM
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QUOTE (Itu @ Feb 26 2006, 01:13 PM) QUOTE (Fullmetal Joe @ Feb 26 2006, 03:02 PM) nice job on the poetry..i like it Ah, thankies thankies. no problem just be sure to post more when you can...  -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 26 February 2006, 02:50 PM
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Ah, okies then. -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 4 March 2006, 08:34 PM
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Wonders What of talks of silent night, eager flight, and the horrid turkish delight? Willful springs and dormant things, of silver bright, dormant knight. Wooden harrows, small and narrow, and yet still so white... Working sing-song of our fright, distant and dawning kite. -------------------
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| Fullmetal Joe |
Posted: 5 March 2006, 09:07 AM
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u posted more poetry good job!  -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 5 March 2006, 09:32 AM
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-Chuckles- Thanks. -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 6 March 2006, 07:01 PM
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Rainy Night ~ Written 04.1.17 Trying to sleep, I turn over for the seemingly millionth time, Guess I can't let out a peep, For fear of waking the sleepfulness of my kind, Alrighty then, I think to myself, Just let me slowly slip away and dream, Closing my eyes, picturing my mind's bookshelf, I choose the book for which the subject of my dream will be, Rain... I chose the silvery music... Well, guess I'll stick with the game... Dropping my sleepless body, I no longer can hear my clock tick... Surrounded by the rain, It's falling everywhere round me, The music played without any strains, Flowing throughout the world I see, Silvery light from the stars in the open sky, Making the trees' leaves glow with a soft green, In the distance, mountains rising to cover the horizon's line, The rain falls in an eternal curtain weaving unintelligable dreams, Ah, the rain... And its soft touch upon my skin... There I lean against a tree hoping sleep will take me away... Goodnight, lovely rain, a blanket covering me, sleep begins. -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 6 March 2006, 07:07 PM
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Thinking About Death ~ Written 04.1.30 So many things, coming to my mind's eye seemingly, endless thoughts flowing inside This sleepless night is passing so slowly death is one of the many obsessions Possibilities flow along with dreams and death just adds a tune to go with them Oh death; is it the end of the drawing the one I began with my very first, deep breath Or, have I paused to work on the details is it that the stream has not ended yet that the lifeless pool is not to be faced Oh river, oh drawing, you shant end now. -------------------
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| Itu |
Posted: 6 March 2006, 07:10 PM
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Simple ~ Written 04.2.25 Simple stain simple dove simple pain simple love Reaching out to catch love reaching now caught the dove Controlling its meaning destroying the feeling Simple stain simple dove simple pain simple love Feather falls oh, so white touches ground on this night Eyes are blank wings are limp milky white sent adrift Simple stain simple dove simple pain simple love Finished love ended pain bye-bye dove hello stain. -------------------
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| Duke |
Posted: 6 March 2006, 07:17 PM
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Very Rythmic if you read at a slighty fast pace. I like it. |
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| Itu |
Posted: 6 March 2006, 07:19 PM
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QUOTE (Duke @ Mar 6 2006, 10:17 PM) Very Rythmic if you read at a slighty fast pace. I like it. Thank you... that's what I used to work for when I was younger. -------------------
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